Scriptwriting excellence

yes. we do note our script is a bit brief for a film. when i read it , it is still one dimensional, overly blatant, resultantly bland lacking a professional natural touch we aimed to get. we sat down one evening planning on how we can revamp and construct a stronger and believable script.

Since publicity week is over, we now move our focus to the script. me and Kaywee had met. no major changes on our part, (unless martin comes up with amazing things) BUT do expect more 'color' injected into the script which we believe will make our inaugural film a smashing hit.

These are the key considerations in Damien's Monologue Version 3:

• Quirks and subtleties for Damien (character complexities think Heath Ledger's Joker)
• Set design
• Pace of film
• Framing, cropping of video cam
• Play with visuals (seeing and not seeing)
• Play with color and lighting
• Surprises
• Brushing up on rashness
• Metaphors and imageries in film

Also do note:

1. already tim had composed the song, "Serene" and also found us a band.
2. martin has volunteered his assistance to make better the script.
3. actors and actresses have been chosen from the wide response.